Hey Guys! I haven't updated this blog in...ages. So I decided to share with you an analysis I wrote not too long ago. Sadly, my teacher didn't give much feedback except a few ticks. ARGH. Enjoy.
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The Pros and Cons of Beauty Pageants
Recently, child beauty
pageants have become the centre for debate. Although child beauty pageants
began in the 1960’s, the murder of JonBenet Ramsey (1996) caused the public eye
to turn its focus to child beauty pageants. From then on, the issue has
increasingly gained acute criticism regarding the wellbeing of contestants
despite parents’ claims that participating boosts children’s confidence and
self-esteem. In the article Materialistic, Narcissistic, Unrealistic:
Child Beauty Pageants a Disgrace published in the Avonlea Scrutineer on 2nd February 2011 columnist J.Rodd
confronts the issues circulating child beauty pageants. Rodd extensively describes
the formula for the perfect beauty pageant contestant and the strings that come
attached with the package. A broad range of persuasive techniques are covered
ranging from expert testimony to appeals to responsibility. Rodd’s exasperated
tone is evident throughout the text, which support the cause-and-effect
relationships that she pin-points in her arguments.
In an effort to unsheathe the
inconvenient truth about child beauty pageants, Rodd repeatedly uses emotive
language along with expert testimony to support her arguments. The ‘toxic
atmosphere’ that these contestants participate in encapsulates the ‘brutal
truth’ that ‘not every child can be a winner’, which effectively positions
readers to feel sympathetic towards the victimised children. Furthermore, the
‘self-confining cycle of performance anxiety’ that traps those who win and the
‘lasting damage’ that those who lose suffer from sheds light on the fact that
contestants are playing a game they will never win. Expert testimony is used to
support Rodd’s assertions that child beauty pageants have negative effects on
contestants whether that is physically or mentally. The consequences of ‘being
a little Barbie doll’ can ‘unleash…destructive self-experiences’ leading to
‘eating disorders and all kinds of body distortions’ as stated by William
Pinsof, a clinical psychologist. This testimony persuades the reader to believe
Rodd’s assertions as not only is Pinsof a psychologist but also the president
of the Family Institute at Northwestern University, indicating that he is a
high profile man whose statement regarding child beauty pageants is within his
field of expertise, thus leaving readers to feel that child beauty pageants can
only produce negative outcomes.
Two
illustrations have been inserted into the article to evoke an emotional
response from the reader. Each of the illustrations are colourless, however in
the case of the stick figure, the lack of colour suggests that the child feels
invisible as they are the only ones who appreciate their own ‘specialness’,
thus positioning the audience to understand the loneliness those children
undergo. The effect of having the illustration of the stick figure, allows the
reader to further connect the drawing to that of a child due to its similarity
to that of a child’s drawing. Although the second illustration depicts a
stereotypical princess, her extravagance is lost as she too, is colourless like
the first illustration of the stick figure, however her reason for being
colourless is quite the opposite to that of the stick figure. It can be
concluded that the lack of colour in the case of the princess is to represent
the fact that despite her appearance, she is still very much the same as the
insecure stick figure. Rodd’s reason for inserting two colourless illustrations
is to compare and contrast the fantasy of child beauty pageants which is
represented by the illustration of the princess to the reality which is
represented by the stick figure, provoking the reader to establish the lonely
link between the two and to evoke a sense of discernment in the reader.
Appealing
to our sense of responsibility, Rodd accentuates the fact that condoning
participation in the ‘distorted’ and ‘pretentious’ world of beauty pageants is
fundamentally robbing children of the ‘innocence of childhood’. This appeal
encourages the audience to feel guilty as though we are as low as thieves for
permitting these children to participate in what seems like a ‘cynical exercise
in marketing’. Similarly, rhetorical questions are used to ask the obvious
questions that the reader knows the answer to but won’t ask themselves. Questions
such as ‘Can a responsible parent really see this as positive?’ and ‘What kind of parent wants their child to…?’
places emphasis on the parents’ responsibility for making sure their children
grow into normal people and how weaving beauty pageants into their lifestyle is
not a ‘path to self-development’ but more a ‘gratification of adult appetites
or egos’. Through the use of rhetorical questions, Rodd, places parents in the
spotlight, outlining the responsibilities they are required to take up and the
selfishness the parents of those child beauty pageant contestants display. The
writer negates all claims in the defence of child beauty pageants, therefore
leaving no room for the audience to view child beauty pageants in a positive
light.
Overall,
Rodd’s appeal to responsibility and expert testimony pose as the strongest
persuasive techniques as one plays around with the reader’s emotion but is supported
by substantial evidence. Similarly, the use of emotive words rouses sentiment
in the target audience, who in this case are the members of public whom enjoy
viewing child beauty pageants and the parents of the contestants. Through the
appeal to responsibility, parents are positioned to feel guilt and somewhat
ashamed for permitting their children to participate in such vain events whilst
those who watch the events are positioned to feel equally at fault as they fuel
the industry.
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